Sunday, September 4, 2011

What was wrong with the memo


The beginning of the memo should be direct and to the point so it is a quick read for the correspondent. There is no heading to the memo and doesn’t begin with a statement. It lacks effectiveness by being too having too many words. They should have had bulleted information. The last paragraph in the memo has a rude tone and should briefly thank the reader for their time.

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